Comments for Bulldog Breath http://santababylonia.net/wordpress A blog by Gregory Severance Wed, 20 Aug 2008 00:58:22 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 Comment on Unrolled Space by skyplumber http://santababylonia.net/wordpress/?p=41&cpage=1#comment-118 skyplumber Wed, 20 Aug 2008 00:58:22 +0000 http://santababylonia.net/wordpress/?p=41#comment-118 lol lol

]]> Comment on Full Sad Ripples by Richard Taylor http://santababylonia.net/wordpress/?p=19&cpage=1#comment-30 Richard Taylor Sun, 20 Apr 2008 02:35:07 +0000 http://santababylonia.net/wordpress/?p=19#comment-30 I commented down below on another one - as I say these are fascinating...cheers, Richard I commented down below on another one – as I say these are fascinating…cheers, Richard

]]> Comment on Familiar Landscape by Richard Taylor http://santababylonia.net/wordpress/?p=15&cpage=1#comment-29 Richard Taylor Sun, 20 Apr 2008 02:33:44 +0000 http://santababylonia.net/wordpress/?p=15#comment-29 I like this one - and the others - the conjunction of images and words. great language here! "timid inifinites" and things like particularities whirling within windowpanes and doorways Almost a poem by itself!! Do you do the images, then respond? Or just put the writing and image in conjunction? I did a long thing called CHAINS in which I started with a word and then would respond to it and that would link to the next phrase and so on... I like this one – and the others – the conjunction of images and words. great language here! “timid inifinites” and things like

particularities
whirling within
windowpanes and doorways

Almost a poem by itself!!

Do you do the images, then respond? Or just put the writing and image in conjunction?

I did a long thing called CHAINS in which I started with a word and then would respond to it and that would link to the next phrase and so on…

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